Revising to Build Relationships

Via Krista Stanley, I came across some interesting tips on ending scenes in a novel and creating links between those scenes. Feel like I’ve given insufficient attention to these concepts so far in Gray Metal Faces, as I’ve had a fairly narrow focus on each chapter during the drafting process. Will make these relationships a point of emphasis during the revision of The Land Without Mosquitos.

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2 thoughts on “Revising to Build Relationships

  1. The land without mosquitos captured my interest. I will be very intrigued to see how you work and revise or add to this. The story was quite riveting. I wonder if you will expand relationships. Cheers. Good Luck with it all.

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